Destiny once stood by my side and guided me to effortless success. It was soothing at that point of time. It was solace then. In due course it added a fourth dimension to my character - "Overconfidence"-as the people call. I prefer to call it doom.
At this juncture of life when fate has thrown me in the whirlpool of a sunless sea where mournings seem to be the only sound & pathos, the only abstraction; I abuse destiny. My brain considers him to be the sole culprit but my mind does the contrary. It gives a half smile and says-"Oppurtunities dont rush and destiny does not bless all". Emperor Brain along with his mighty army is all set to participate in this civil war. The banished mind is not strong enough to evade.Yet this heart,the ultimate leveller dreades his half smile and in a nanosecond the whole army of brain vanishes in thin air.
As u all have very well understood , brain is nourished with convictions and make beliefs which are proved wrong by the mind's half smile which is nothing but man's sense of guilt.
Dead dreams accumulate on my soul and solidify into a rock.A rock of infinite weight. A burden which even mankind cannot bear. At the end of the day we are homo sapiens, whatever happens hope does not go against us. It carries with it a string of vile promises . Drowned in this necter , man crafts his fantasies and trancends himself . He travels towards a new day and a new beginning.
3 comments:
Abstract and out of the box ideas. :) enjoyed reading particularly the last paragraph.
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another paulo coelho in making...
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tone down ur writing a lil bit.....surely gonna sound better fantasies !its good 2 b abstract bt i think its betr 2 b simpler while u portray ur abstraction :)
stop using "the people"
instead use "they say"
derz 1 line wic says somtg like "the considers him".......cudnt undstd wats dat ur trying 2 personify !
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